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There is no guarantee when it comes to the heart... though love released with sincere eternity – our carriers, though Homers of loyal wings transverse a sky of hawks There is no guarantee when it comes to matters of interpersonal love – only God knows man's truest beats – for the mortal heart is an aggressor while also retreats Love, indeed!~ is a campaign of sorts armies of feelings going forth entrenchment on both sides love often hides while never a victory without two fond surrenders

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Date: 2/4/2023 6:45:00 AM
WOW! OMG, Joe! I knew this as a Fav before i ended reading! A masterfully written; wise; life experienced, behavior observed; philosophical, psychological, emotional round-up Classical classic. Standing ovation (With cheers heard from here & there) dynamic poem! Hugs galore! sally
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/4/2023 6:51:00 AM
Thank you thank you, Sally; I really don't know how to respond. You have made my day. Blessings my friend. So pleased this work has stirred such passionate response. Our natural inclination is to lift one another. Your comment has certainly brightened my day.
Date: 2/4/2023 2:13:00 AM
Ahh yes but when two surrender to love, magic happens, but it depends on the power of the magic, how long it will last. I visualise your armies of feelings marching forward Joe. Terrific poem.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/4/2023 6:32:00 AM
Hi Wen; thank you. I guess it comes down to passion and determination. One needs to work, often fight for love. I have the battle scars. Blessings my friend.
Date: 2/3/2023 4:31:00 PM
Sometimes it is natural and other times it’s awkward.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/4/2023 6:33:00 AM
Natural maybe even the most awkward. Blessings my friend.
Date: 2/3/2023 1:10:00 PM
When love is victorious Joe there is always two satisfied customers lol :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/3/2023 4:02:00 PM
For sure -- love is a partnership. Thank you, Vie.
Date: 2/3/2023 9:01:00 AM
No guarantee true, but life can be made easier if one gives and takes. Lovely poem
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/3/2023 9:07:00 AM
For sure...never to forget, that giving is a form of surrender, letting go of something deemed precious and often guarded at all cost. And taking can be a form of surrender...pride admitting to need apart from greed. Thank you, Victor.

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