No Future

Ecstasy for me now something from history loneliness is my rendezvous with my future normal life becomes abnormal a mystery a broken heart can't be fixed by any suture, her charm was so unique, now lost in times vortex she showed tenderness, kindness, possessed such finesse without her I am lost, life has become complex living here all alone causes to much distress, my minds got unnaturally precarious gallivanting from one thought then to another together we were happy quite gregarious now I feel nonchalant couldn't care for no other, Can I cope living my life that is such a mess life without her I'm not sure I can acquiesce. 5/9/2018

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Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/11/2018 9:55:00 AM

This may be beautiful fiction to you, but to much of it I can relate. Very nice.

Roy Pett
Date: 5/11/2018 12:15:00 PM

Thank you so much Sunlite, I hope what I’ve written has not been too upsetting for you as that wouldn’t be my intention, I composed this for the eight word contest, thank you for reading and commenting my friend. :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/9/2018 6:17:00 PM

Beautiful and poignant poem that truly captures the anguished feelings in the loss of a loved one, Roy. Great write. :)

Roy Pett
Date: 5/11/2018 5:07:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Laura, I really appreciate your support and encouragement. :))

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/9/2018 9:13:00 AM

Very delicate rendering Roy..pain of lost love well captured in your words..excellent poem!

Roy Pett
Date: 5/9/2018 1:29:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Vijay, incorporating the eight words was quite challenging but enjoyable, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/9/2018 7:22:00 AM

A well written poem with so much feeling and great use of the words required Roy! :)

Roy Pett
Date: 5/9/2018 7:31:00 AM

Thank you Heidi you can’t imagine how grateful I am to receive your comment, thank you so much for your much appreciated kindness. :))