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Falling asleep, a very deep sleep that lasted for hours Awakening to run through a meadow of wild daisies Gentle stream flows through the middle_a tree with powers Of apothecaries now no pain no finalities
Sponsor: Carolyn Devonshire Contest: Perceptions Of Heaven

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Date: 3/30/2012 7:23:00 AM
I LOVE IT. that's how I hope it will be too. Congratulations, Sara.
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Date: 3/29/2012 11:33:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry Sara. I truly enjoy reading yours. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/27/2012 9:48:00 AM
I have seen fields of wild daisies Sara and surely it holds all that is exquisite. A lovely verse so worthy of your win! Hugs, Lizzie
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Date: 3/27/2012 7:54:00 AM
This is nice. You are a amazing poetess.
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Date: 3/27/2012 7:07:00 AM
my arm is numb and very painful have been up since 4am with pain....Monday was wonderful but I am paying the price for gardening.
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Date: 3/27/2012 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/26/2012 7:38:00 PM
congrats Sara on a dynamic win for this lovely depiction of the great beyond luv.. elegant..
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Date: 3/26/2012 3:40:00 PM
Congrad's on your winning write! Light & Love
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Date: 3/26/2012 2:52:00 PM
Beautifully and skillfully written and congratulations on your win, Sara. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/26/2012 1:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sara. Excellent. Nice going. huggs Ralph
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Date: 3/26/2012 12:35:00 PM
Sara, I love the way you described waking in a meadow of daisies with a stream. I too believe there will be no pain in heaven. Great write! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/26/2012 1:11:00 AM
A beautiful vision of Heaven, Sara! Daisies are one of my favorite flowers. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/25/2012 11:20:00 PM
Sara,,, enjoyed..goodluck in the contest....take care and have yourself a good night~LUV*PD
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Date: 3/25/2012 7:46:00 PM
wow! a very apt description for the title and theme sara. beautiful poem. good luck on the contest and thanks for stopping by and your kind comment
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Date: 3/25/2012 6:20:00 PM
a cool reflection..should rank high, jag
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Date: 3/25/2012 3:59:00 PM
What a fantastic write my friend! I love your vision of heaven, very beautiful! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/25/2012 3:30:00 PM
A lovely vision of heaven indeed, my friend
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