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No Feeling

The wind blows as the rain comes pouring down The clouds fall as they twist round and round What an amazing site but no feeling The birds fly away home as their little wings become wet The rats run under my dome into the the rust brown shed Something I wouldn't allow but still no feeeling yet The very next day as I awake on a light blue morning No sounds to be made and the nothing seemed to take over me I realized I had feeling after all The nothing seemed to fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/8/2011 3:49:00 PM
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Date: 3/7/2011 2:45:00 PM
A beautiful rendering fill with imagery, release and nurture could be absent in our today's lives a good one.
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