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No Feeling

The wind blows as the rain comes pouring down
The clouds fall as they twist round and round
What an amazing site but no feeling

The birds fly away home as their little wings become wet
The rats run under my dome into the the rust brown shed
Something I wouldn't allow but still no feeeling yet

The very next day as I awake on a light blue morning
No sounds to be made and the nothing seemed to take over me
I realized I had feeling after all
The nothing seemed to fall

Copyright © Angela Solis

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  1. Date: 3/8/2011 3:49:00 PM
    Soup mail returned!!!!!!

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 2:45:00 PM
    A beautiful rendering fill with imagery, release and nurture could be absent in our today's lives a good one.