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No Fair Fer Shure

Poor ol' boy Richard Odekirk, Just couldn't get fired and hasta work. It's unfair that he'll miss the enjoyment, Of his 96 weeks of Unemployment! Just for Caties contest!!!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/23/2011 6:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "You Who...Yo, Cherihew". A well deserved win William. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/14/2011 6:15:00 PM

Congratulations on nthe well deserved win in the contest, William

Deb Radke

Date: 2/14/2011 1:06:00 PM

This is very good. Cleverly said and well written. Congratulations on your winning placement. Well deserved. Best wishes. Deb

Sidney Beck

Date: 2/13/2011 9:01:00 AM

Well done ! you have gained a much-deserved win in this contest….best wishes….Syd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2011 7:26:00 AM

Congrats Will on your first place win in Catie's contest my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 2/9/2011 10:42:00 PM

Wonderful Clerihew !Congrats on your 1st place win!---kashinath

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/9/2011 7:55:00 PM

excellent William, deserved winner, enjoyed. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2011 7:26:00 PM

oh, I remember this one. HOw cool that you got top place! congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/9/2011 5:11:00 PM

wow fantastic! GREAT win Light & Love

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/9/2011 4:06:00 PM

Funny and descriptive. No wonder you won first place in Catie's contest. Congratulations!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/9/2011 3:44:00 PM

congratulations to you William on your fine poem for first place win

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/9/2011 12:44:00 PM

congrats on your first place win in Caties contest!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2011 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/9/2011 11:42:00 AM

Hooray for you!! Number one and so funny!! Congratulations!

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/9/2011 11:08:00 AM

Ain't that the TRUTH! LOL! Congratulations on your 1st Place WIN in Catie's contest. Best wishes, KC

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/9/2011 10:00:00 AM

First place for a top-notch poem, William. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/6/2011 1:44:00 PM

Quite humorous and witty write on Richard odekirk, William

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2011 4:04:00 AM

Enjoyed the humor..Got a chuckle..He must be an excellent worker or the employer desperate...Good luck in the contest..Hoping that today is bringing you better health..Your kind review of my work was much appreciated..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2011 12:08:00 AM

hahaha, I don't even know who this guy is, I thought maybe a famous guy, but I googled someone just an ordinary guy i saw. This is really funny. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/5/2011 6:56:00 PM

Nice humor and funny expressions, William

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/5/2011 6:33:00 PM

Cool one Will and good luck in the contest.. awesome muse u chose to do your Clerihew .. great lines of expression my friend.. good luck int he contest..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/5/2011 6:18:00 PM

Yikes, with 96 weeks of unemployment, it's understandable why Richard wanted to get fired. Very funny, William! Wishing you luck in Catie's contest. She's had some very entertaining entries and yours is certainly up there. Again, it's nice to see you here on the Soup. Love, Carolyn