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No Better Place

This reminds me of my dad who died on board the Carrier Intrepid and Battleship Arizona sunk in Hawaiian harbor. No Better Place Deep down in water was a ship wreck; Silence flowed from forward to back deck; Loneliness was over ship's entire length, With no energy left or any strength. God's fish swam gently here and there, Death and suffering was found everywhere; While all their bodies and souls would wait For God to pick them up at a certain date. Date came and God took each one again Back to heaven having let them all in; For families and relatives saved a place, Full of God's love and His much grace. Heaven many say has always been known, As a perfect, pleasant place of its own, For each soul who did die under the sea And no better place could there ever be. James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran

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Date: 2/14/2015 8:24:00 AM
Very nice poem Jim heaven awaits
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James Horn
Date: 2/14/2015 1:10:00 PM
Terry, Glad to see we are finally on the same wave length. Still didn't receive an email message from Poetry Soup though concerning your comment. Oh, well. Jim Horn
Date: 2/14/2015 5:03:00 AM
Beautiful poem James. A 7 from me. Hugs Janet
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Date: 2/14/2015 5:12:00 AM
Janet, That was fast. My goal is 900 by my 74th Birthday on June 26th and maybe 1,000 by August 27th on our 49th wedding anniversary. That will move up there in the all-time poems written list. Jim Horn

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