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No One Gets It Right

A ritual of mating, the God of lust conferring no blessing on either sex. just a heated dance around each other testing the already sullied waters with dirt feet worn out on a path tread once too often. But then it was something no one got right, right? women too scared men overeager or girls brazenly bold with boys too decent for games in the dark. married couples acting like siblings sister playing wife to brother dear, cousins getting away with everything and the old saintly by default. A mixed business it is I am certain. No one gets it right. everyone with large appetites for flesh flesh and then more flesh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 6/10/2017 1:42:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, you ve expressed your thoughts beautifully, every line is better than another, welcome to poetrysoup and remind me when you post your next poem however I m new on this site and also from pakistan and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 3/16/2016 11:24:00 PM
AYESHA AHMED, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/14/2016 10:58:00 PM
AYESHA, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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