Nirvana

The sun radiates The animals celebrate Dancing shadows Ever-blooming flora The feast of an unbroken wilderness A single soul turning to innocence Hearts born to the untrodden earth Nature - no place for man made trees or concrete earth. Haven for the free-spirited barefoot creatures Let's call it Nirvana

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Skat A

Date: 1/21/2016 8:20:00 PM

enjoying this verse once again. skat

Kim Van Breda

Date: 6/20/2013 12:49:00 PM

Nirvana indeed.. nice write. I wonder if we analyzed Kurt Cobains choice of band name, he would identify.

Skat A

Date: 6/20/2013 8:33:00 AM

Good morning Mone' wow, is this another life. love the free-spirit. Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/20/2013 5:15:00 AM

Hey, Mone`! - Pleased to read your first poem in the P-Soup! - You write very well. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us :) - Here it is: give to get, comments - then you will get feedback on your writing - I love get feedback on what I write. - Wish you luck my "new friend" - Have fun with poetry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2013 1:47:00 PM

Hi Mone' you picked an awesome poem to post on the soup. great imagery on this subject. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda