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Nine Souls

[Note: this poem was written in memory of a specific mass killing at a church, but there has been since then so much evil done at churches, temples, and mosques--all houses of God...as are all schools where children go to learn. ] When he came to the church, a disciple of the Opposition, did he plan to take his time? Did he relish watching those good people around the table as they shared their struggles, with others, themselves, God? Did he play in his forsaken mind (so bereft of love or even a tinge of compassion) just whose life he would take first, and who would die last? What a sense of power a gun gives to a coward, playing god in God's own house. Joyful he must have felt as he took their lives but freed their souls-nine souls he could not see yet they saw him, standing exultant over their now unneeded bodies, his hate satiated. But they would not hate him, for God's children love, and love now filled their souls, as it filled their lives when they walked on the earth. So they would pray together one last time in the church they loved, praying for the damned soul of the sad man until the angels came to carry them off to God's open arms.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/9/2020 1:31:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win, L.J. :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/9/2020 9:05:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 9/8/2020 8:21:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/9/2020 9:05:00 AM
Gracias, y vaya con Dios siempre!
Date: 1/7/2020 9:50:00 PM
Sincere congratulations for your Honorable Mention in Brian's contest, LJ - keep the ink flowing, my friend, and best wishes for a bountiful and healthy New Year. Blessings! :o)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/8/2020 8:02:00 AM
Thank you my friend, and may you and your family have a very blessed 2020!
Date: 1/7/2020 1:13:00 PM
Bravo, L.J.! Your poem beautifully juxtaposes the defeat of hate by love. Wonderful opposing images that illustrate your timely theme. Congratulations on your HM.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/7/2020 2:03:00 PM
Thanks Sam-- you get it! Have a great 2020!
Date: 1/6/2016 12:47:00 AM
Len, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/7/2020 2:04:00 PM
Thanks, Linda
Date: 1/3/2016 11:32:00 PM
LEN, Congratulations on your "Angel" win. **SKAT**
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/7/2020 2:04:00 PM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 1/3/2016 2:13:00 PM
Powerful poem Ien, love the last verse. Congratualtions on your win. From Jean
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/7/2020 2:06:00 PM
Thanks Jean-- must confess I love it too!
Date: 1/2/2016 2:29:00 PM
Triumph from evil. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/7/2020 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Joyce
Date: 1/1/2016 8:34:00 PM
Congratulations Len.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/7/2020 2:07:00 PM
Thanks Nayda [love your name!]
Date: 8/25/2015 4:52:00 PM
Nice write. Your words was loud and clear. I hope you will check out some of my work. I just put a new poem up called "Absence of Color" I think you would enjoy it. I hope to see you there. Have a good evening!!!
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