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Nine For Breakfast (Multiple Tanka)

NINE FOR BREAKFAST (multiple Tanka) he counted just six after all it was raining cats hate to get wet but normally there were nine nine hungry cats for breakfast they all had a name most to match their color midnight and shadow rainbow a red brown and white marmalade orange long hair ghost all gray and white ravenous always hungry patches tortoise shell tray a tiny black and white stripe american short hair this morning just six he could not help worrying they were family three of them had no front claws these three were quite defenseless cared for then turned out turned out to fend for themselves miles from their warm homes to a world of predators midnight shadow marmalade these three were careful they stood off while the rest ate they got leftovers these three were missing breakfast he couldn’t help but worry bowls were empty now all six had left the front porch he’d withheld one can “kitty kitty kitty” he softly called "midnight shadow marmalade" then out of nowhere through the driving wind and rain all three came as one wet wild frightened and hungry oh then how that man did smile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/12/2010 7:21:00 AM
well this made me smile too! if this is you, just have to say you are one big hearted guy! and I totally loved the names of those cats, it actually reminded me of how we named our kittens before--it was kinda cool actually since they were all black & white but their black patches resembled letters---one that stood out really well my fave actually was Fluffy (he had the letter F) then there was Duff, Buff, Puff and Huff haha and their mom was called Sexy Mama since she always got pregnant! -nikko
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Date: 6/11/2010 2:51:00 PM
Poor defenceless kittens, this one sure got me, I'm so glad they were found.. enjoyed...P.D.
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Date: 6/11/2010 8:54:00 AM
Good poem here- Kindness goes a long way
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Date: 6/10/2010 5:47:00 PM
A wonderful write. Enjoyed the story.
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Date: 6/10/2010 5:22:00 PM
I take it this is based on a true story. YOu heard of cat lady? I dub thee "cat man" hahaha. VEry nice ones to read. Luv, andrea
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Date: 6/10/2010 1:29:00 PM
Excellent write..The story got my attention and held me captivated...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/10/2010 12:40:00 PM
Cats who have been declawed stand little chance outdoors when facing predators. I'm so glad your three missing kitties returned, Daver. Big smiles to you for bringing them home with a tempty treat! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/10/2010 12:35:00 PM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this afternoon Daver. Wishing you another day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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