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Nine

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Nine

He had asked me out on a date today
"Restaurant I know,but not the time",I sigh.
So standing in the corridor, signaled him in class
He threw me a paper and we waved bye.
There was number six written on it ,I rush 
To get ready quick and look beautiful to surprise.
I get there, wait until patience crossed the line,
Then angrily call him up when he doesn't show up.. 
Just to hear him say,"Baby,I meant nine!"

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  1. Date: 1/26/2013 7:01:00 PM
    A funny take on Tracie's 9! Belated congratulations on your win, Sadaf! Ruben.

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 4:41:00 PM
    oh how cute the way you did a nine poem with this upside down six. Awesome!

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 3:31:00 AM
    Congratulations on your awesome win.. I like it... ;) Good day!!

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:32:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Sadaf. - Ralph

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 12:35:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 11:28:00 AM
    Congratulations on your top spot Sadaf xx

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:59:00 AM
    Sadaf , :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice nice nine lines in Tracie's :-) " #9 " awesome contest... love always ~PD

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:57:00 AM
    A poem with a nice twist...congrats on ur win Sadaf...:))

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:42:00 AM
    the error 6 to 9 gives a nice poetic twist! well done

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 6:53:00 PM
    Congratulations on your big win my dear Sadaf! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 5:40:00 PM
    I like your punch line at the end !! I think she will have a hard time judging these poems, even with such simple rules to follow. This made me smile, a paper turned upside down..so sad too !! Enjoyed !!