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Nighttime

The fan that runs beside me is to keep the quiet down Thoughts come an invade me when my feet are off the ground The cat purrs lightly The clocks ticks precisely Straining to hear nothing To avoid my mind discussing Silence is not deafening Your real thoughts are threatening There are no bumps in the night Just unwanted hindsight Trapped with your mind, no escape Your life appears on video tape Don't think about this, don't think about that Imagine nothing, only black Slowly your mind will stop the scan It finally kicks in, your clonazepam August 2, 2016 Aa, bb, cc, dd, ee

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Date: 7/7/2016 1:14:00 AM
I have to congratulate you as well, but you selected monorhyme as the form for your poem. Monorhyme means identical rhyme on every line. The P.S has a great example. Your poem is a great couplet but it is not monorhyme...... Pashang
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Date: 6/14/2016 10:36:00 AM
Nice poem...it says a lot "Imagine ...black" If only we could enjoy the peaceful night, chasing all the thoughts. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 6/14/2016 4:01:00 AM
Congrats Tanis, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 6/13/2016 8:24:00 PM
Congratulations Tanis on the placement of the contest
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