Nightscape

The frantic moon -- After waking from a nightmare The cold of my room

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2011 11:22:00 AM

I like how this one kind of rhymed and the imagery of it. Very nice, JIm. Happy thanksgiving.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/13/2011 11:04:00 PM

Excellent haiku! I have been learning how to really write haikus from an expert, and you know how. Well done! And thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Caroline.

Jim Wilson
Date: 11/14/2011 6:56:00 AM

Thanks, Caroline, for taking the time to post such a supportive comment. Best wishes, Jim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/13/2011 10:45:00 PM

Jim... a very epic,, haiku... can feel the coldnes.....Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a lovely night ;-) ,..LINDA

Jim Wilson
Date: 11/14/2011 6:58:00 AM

Linda, thanks for your kind words. You also have a poetry-productive day. Jim