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Night's Empty Stillness

I saw the dark and cold night creeping, pushing away Sun’s glorious light. I heard its hopeless sounds of sleeping feeding on despair’s delight. I felt the pain of day dreams dying, flowing through my heart and soul, and heard dark night's empty stillness crying, ringing loud its silent toll. But, in answer to my prayer, God sent me a dream of the dawn’s glorious Sun, as it was in the beginning of His first day… His most warm and brilliant ray. Through the dense, dark webs that my night had spun, born again was hope of day. March 5, 2015 ~1st Place~ Contest: A Strand (1046) Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 01/07/2022

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Date: 1/7/2022 10:59:00 PM
Wow Sandra, your poetry never ceases to impress! This is beautiful! Congratulations on your wonderful win my friend. The star shape is perfect for the season too. I hope you are well and that you had a lovely holiday. New year blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/7/2022 12:10:00 AM
Great poem and great shape. I wouldn’t have the skill or patience to create one. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/5/2015 11:15:00 PM
I agree with Laura - simply stunning poem Sandra - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2015 7:45:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you for the positive comment and best wishes for the contest. I appreciate your support so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/5/2015 8:06:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem in every way, Sandra, with a hopeful ending!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2015 7:45:00 PM
Hi Laura, I am pleased that you like it. Thank you so much for the nice comment. Hugs, Sandra

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