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Nightlight Blue

The parched, cracked earth receives the rain into a billion hungry mouths; she suckles at the sky’s wet breast swaddled in cloud-gray gauzy blouse. Sweet budding grasses nod and sway; infant creatures babble and croon, as Mother Nature tucks all in ‘neath nightlight-blue lullaby moon. Copyright, July 19, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 7/23/2014 1:18:00 PM
Such stunning imagery! I'm enamoured by this quatrain.
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Date: 7/21/2014 8:22:00 PM
This is awe inspiring my friend. Eight lines of perfection!!!!!! If for a contest it is sure to take first place...
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/21/2014 8:40:00 PM
Thank you, Robert. This one is not for a contest; maybe I can enter it in one later. Appreciate you stopping by.
Date: 7/21/2014 4:50:00 PM
wow, a maternal personification of nature. SO COOL. And a very sweet lullaby tone to it. Was it for any of the challenges?
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/21/2014 8:39:00 PM
Not for a challenge, Andrea...glad you like it.
Date: 7/20/2014 6:40:00 PM
wow!!!!! i love the imagery Faye my friend.. :D!!!! i love the effects too.. :) please keep it this up.. :) ill be following you.. :D love you writes.. :)
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/21/2014 8:37:00 PM
Olive, thank you and I would love to keep it up. Lol! Sometimes I have no clue what I am doing.
Date: 7/20/2014 6:38:00 PM
Faye, This is exactly why you are a First Class Poet
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/21/2014 8:37:00 PM
You are so nice, Jerry. I am glad you like this one.

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