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Night Visions

Softly now lap the waves on the sea shore light dancing mysteriously on each crest showing a rainbow of colours at their best the pier backlit by the gay lights of the store Shadowy pools glisten in the moon light reflecting back the moon beam rays showing still just a little hint of the bays now full darkness descends in its might Peaceful bliss from daily hustle and bustle drinking in all that surrounds this place when I leave, of me there will be no trace as I now return home to my lovely castle

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Jake Ponce

Date: 5/19/2014 7:28:00 AM

This poem took me to a lighthouse at night. Only natural lights and that of the lighthouse could be seen. A city can be seen not too far and there is calm in the character's mind. You use very vivid images, Shadow. It's like lucid dreaming. <3

Jack Horne

Date: 3/31/2014 2:52:00 PM

lovely write with beautiful descriptions - thanks, loved the contest : )

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/2/2014 5:14:00 AM

ty Jack glad you enjoyed it hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/29/2014 9:52:00 AM

It has been a while since you have visited, I hope all is okay.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/2/2014 5:13:00 AM

all is fine ty Rick hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2014 2:05:00 AM

Hi Shadow, this is my kind of poetry. I love the light dancing mysteriously. Enjoyed the blissful feeling... . The images and pictures are perfect... Awesome! xox~ Linda

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/2/2014 5:12:00 AM

ty Linda much appreciated hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/28/2014 8:41:00 AM

I too am a lover of the Sea. Enchanting piece.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/2/2014 5:12:00 AM

ty Rick hugs