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Night Train Whistle

Late at night dreams beckoning me to come to them, as I start to drift off into a relaxing hypnotic state of mind. Hearing a train whistle close by, now am wide awake, I listen to the gentle whistle as the train chugs along the tracks. Then a thought comes to me, I wonder where this lonely train is going. Wishing I could hop that old freight and go see. Only time for me to do that is long gone, so will try to fall asleep and dream about where the old train is going, the whistle sound is almost gone, as I drift off into dream land. written 5-4-11

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Date: 5/7/2011 3:35:00 PM
Sweetly penned James ..ah those memories how they burst into our minds .. we live two blocks from train tacks and hear those whistles every night right on schedule and the sound some nights is melodious to the ears.. relating well to your lovely lines my friend..
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Date: 5/6/2011 2:48:00 PM
I hear ya. A distant train whistle is so mysterious - stirs the imagination. Love it. daver
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Date: 5/6/2011 10:35:00 AM
Wonderfully written...enjoyed--kash
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Date: 5/6/2011 7:45:00 AM
Ahhh...this poem takes me too....right along to my dream state, riding a train in my sleep!! Lovely poem, James!
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Date: 5/5/2011 9:51:00 PM
Nicely thought out, James, and easy to picture through your words. It's never too late to hop on a train and see where it goes, and better choose when you want to hop off. :) Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 5/5/2011 8:54:00 PM
this one just drifts along like that train whistle in the night. VEry nicely done. I really like this kind of poetry!
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:21:00 PM
The effect the train's sound had on you is described so poignantly, James. Who would think a train could take the mind on such a journey? Excellent write -- I used to hear the trains at night when I lived in Tallahassee. Their sound was quite comforting. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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James Foulk
Date: 5/14/2011 6:37:00 PM
thank you for commenting on night train whistle
Date: 5/5/2011 11:32:00 AM
that is so lovely, I want to sleep so I can catch a dream like yours :)
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Date: 5/4/2011 7:03:00 PM
James, i like the way your mind produces this sound gentle music.. a strange way to fall asleep.. but nice way to swift in to the air of dream land.. enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 5/4/2011 6:38:00 PM
Wonderful recollections of memories of the past with nice expressions, James
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Date: 5/4/2011 2:23:00 PM
Lovely piece, James - I could imagine being there : )
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Date: 5/4/2011 12:26:00 PM
good write James can feel the mood from this piece right away,
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Date: 5/4/2011 11:45:00 AM
Just as you drift off to sleep, you are woken by a sudden noise! You toss and turn so you can return to that inner dream land voice! Nice work James! I like your poem :o)
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