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Night Time

The snow was falling on solid ground rabbit looked on bright eyed, fox didn't see her bobbing along so tonight she will survive. Owl was hooting loud and clear waiting for his mouse, wondering where his supper was mouse was safe in his house. Farmers chicken were fast asleep Fox had wandered through looking through the chicken wire making plans of what to do. The geese they heard, so made a gaggle the fox, the farmer spied he raised his gun and took his aim that night the fox he died. The snow was falling thick and fast, That night on solid ground all was quiet once again, now fox was not around.

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Date: 1/12/2014 2:54:00 PM
- A great winter poem - like a fairytale with all the animals - enjoyable to read your poem, Gail! - Thank you ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/10/2014 2:13:00 PM
A great visual write, sad ending. well done. Pete.
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