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Night Symphony

............~~~~~........... ~mosaic moon crest ~ lounging on sky's gauze mantle ~~ wind chimes blow soft songs ................................... (( for Michael Falotico's " A Haiku From Your Window" by nette onclaud ))

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Deb Radke

Date: 2/17/2011 1:26:00 PM

Beautiful, beautiful. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I appreciate it so much. I love your writing. This especially. Love, Deb

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/10/2011 9:45:00 AM

can almost hear those wind chimes, nette :) very nice haiku--thanks for dropping by my poems :D -- and yikes I think I better finish that piece, huh? hugs-- nikko :)

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 2/10/2011 8:54:00 AM

incredible haiku with it's complete features.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/8/2011 4:29:00 PM

Mike should like this one. Looks like a contender to me.

Kash Poet

Date: 2/8/2011 1:19:00 AM

Wonderful picture of night sky you have penned here!Goodluck in the contest-kashinath

David Byrne

Date: 2/7/2011 11:12:00 PM

love it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2011 10:12:00 PM

this is gorgeous. It's sure to do really well in the contest! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/7/2011 8:48:00 PM

Appreciate your sweet congrats on my puppy poem Nette my friend.. Michael seems to be having some trouble posting his winner's list luv.. so hopefully TPS will help him out .. and we shall see who won luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/7/2011 3:37:00 PM

Very creative work that reads like winning circle to me..Good luck in this great contest..Your kind review of my work was uplifting..I am to see the surgeon February 21...Not happy thoughts but I have got to try to get relief from pain..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/7/2011 1:55:00 PM

What an incredible visual, Nette! I love the "mosaic moon" and the description of the "sky's gauze mantle." I can just see the moon lounging there through your words. (We get tons of Seinfeld reruns where I live and I never tire of watching them again. What great characters that series had.) Wishing you success in Michael's contest. Definitely a winner! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/7/2011 1:11:00 PM

Sounds just like my front porch Nette my friend.. and know Michael will just luv this one .. it sings to the reader luv.. good luck in this contest... awesome wind chimes blow soft songs... luv those wind chimes...

Dana Smith

Date: 2/7/2011 12:57:00 PM

mm love this. looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/7/2011 12:51:00 PM

Wow, if that doesn't get highly placed, I will be stunned, fabulous picture. Déirdre

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/7/2011 12:28:00 PM

Nice view I have shared from your window of mosaic moon crest, nette

Deb Radke

Date: 2/7/2011 12:18:00 PM

Oh Nette, I love your writing. It flows so beautifully and wonderfully and magically together. This is outstanding. Best wishes always. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. It means so much to me. Love, Deb

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/7/2011 11:34:00 AM

This is a beauty captured in Haiku, Nette! Breathtaking to behold in my mind. Thanks for all your comments. So appreciated! Love, Annalise