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Night Sky

As I watch the night sky , filled with stars, I feel that the wind is like your hand caressing my face. Your eyes are like streams that travel to my heart and fill it with love. A million stars in the night sky adorned the moon on that special night as we sat together under the moon light. The words of love that you whispered to me - will forever fill my heart and soul with love. The night sky is beautiful, with all the stars lighting up this night. Watching the moon surrounded by them is just pure delight. As I sit here on this beautiful night, watching the milky way in all it's beauty - I wonder if you are somewhere up there watching over me... 03/27/2014 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo For Contest

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Robert Lindley

Date: 5/31/2014 10:51:00 AM

A truly beautiful heartfelt write. Such love, I am sure up there your beloved is watching you and quite pleased too. Great write!!!!!!!

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/31/2014 10:59:00 AM

Thank you so much Robert; I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Mel Merrill

Date: 4/8/2014 12:02:00 AM

Hi Lucilla. A cool poem--and an interesting question at the end. I'd say, yes! ;) Mel

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/20/2014 8:05:00 PM

Thank you and about the question - I know he does.

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/8/2014 6:49:00 AM

Thanks for reading. I too want to believe that our loved ones watch over us after they leave.

Julie Heckman

Date: 4/7/2014 6:18:00 PM

Very nicely done Lucilla the night time is such a magical place. I like to think that those loved ones who have passed away are looking down on me...Julie

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/8/2014 6:52:00 AM

Hi Julie; thanks for reading. I love to watch the sky when it's full of stars. I tjhink they do watch over us.

Robert Andrew Lyle

Date: 4/6/2014 3:06:00 PM

What a beautiful night and the wonder of our gaze as we watch the firmament unfold before our eyes. Great write Lucilla Andy

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/6/2014 4:35:00 PM

Hi Andy; Thank you so much for your nice comment. I do love to watch the stare at night.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/4/2014 10:09:00 PM

Hi there, I have been away for awhile, how nice to return here and read such a beautiful poem!!! :)

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/5/2014 2:57:00 AM

Thank you and I am glad to see you back. Hope you are doing good.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2014 5:44:00 PM

HI LUCY, Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/3/2014 11:14:00 PM

Thank you Linda, I was not sure if it would win.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/2/2014 7:35:00 AM

poignant and lovely write Lucilla congrats on win hugs

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/3/2014 11:13:00 PM

Thank you , I am glad that you like it.

Skat A

Date: 4/2/2014 12:20:00 AM

LUCY:) Congratulations, ON YOUR WIN ~SKAT~

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/3/2014 11:13:00 PM

Thank you Skat.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/1/2014 1:58:00 PM

absolutely pensive and soulfully depicted, lucy.. a well-deserved win in my contest!.. best cheers with huggs!

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/3/2014 11:11:00 PM

Thank you much for the consideration.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/1/2014 3:49:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A NIGHT SKY - Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud, Lucilla ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/1/2014 10:18:00 AM

Thank you AnneLise.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2014 1:03:00 AM

Enjoyed the write creating a nice picture and congrats on the win, lucilla

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/1/2014 10:19:00 AM

Thank you so much DR. Ram for reading the poem.

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/28/2014 2:14:00 PM

Nice similes here! Have you ever read Tolkien's writings? Peace &Love Matthew Anish

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/28/2014 3:45:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem. I have never read the writings.

Mark Peterson

Date: 3/27/2014 11:50:00 PM

Beautiful and supernal in its lovely prose and intent. I revel in the wonder and majesty of the night sky and am instantly captivated by poetry of this sort--especially when it flows with a message of love.

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/27/2014 11:57:00 PM

Thank you Mark, I just wrote that to see if it did good. Glad that you like it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2014 8:36:00 PM

So beautiful. I loved the part about the wind like "your hand caressing my face." I have a question on the third line.Did you mean to say "eyes are like steams"? I am guessing it's a typo and you meant streams. That would make more sense for me. Good wishes in the contest, dear.

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/27/2014 11:03:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I am glad that you pointed that out. I fixes it.

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/27/2014 7:01:00 PM

Very nicely written, Lucilla. I think Nette will give this entry serious consideration.

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/27/2014 11:04:00 PM

Thank you Robert; we'll see what happens.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 3/27/2014 4:53:00 PM

Lucilla, The imagery paints a wonderful painting of the Night Sky! Awesome pen 7 My best, chuck

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/27/2014 5:29:00 PM

Thank you so much. I'm glad that you liked it.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 3/27/2014 3:54:00 PM

very beautifully crafted excellent piece

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/27/2014 4:09:00 PM

Thank you so much Liam for your nice comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2014 3:22:00 PM

- A beautiful poem for the contest Lucilla my friend - A "dreamy / longing" romantic poem - Welcome to read my suggestion ... posted today. - Good luck in the contet, hope to see you on the winning list :))) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/27/2014 3:48:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise. I have not entered any contests in a long time. I will check you out.