Night Sky

Oh glamorous thief You have stolen all my dreams And hidden them each In your obsidian keep Where I search for them in vain.

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Date: 1/9/2014 9:59:00 PM

Congratulations on this fine win, Michael

Michael Dom
Date: 1/13/2014 5:39:00 AM

Thank you Dr Meta, this is very uplifting. It's glorious.

Date: 1/9/2014 7:26:00 PM

wow, I am so glad she liked it as much as me. big congrats on a top win,.

Michael Dom
Date: 1/13/2014 5:37:00 AM

thrilled to find out about it today...fantastic to have A Poettess Darkly like my tanka.

Date: 1/9/2014 10:05:00 AM

Congratulations Michael xx

Michael Dom
Date: 1/13/2014 5:34:00 AM

Thanks Mandy.

Date: 12/28/2013 12:59:00 AM

love this one too. soupmail.

Date: 12/27/2013 8:26:00 PM

Hope you find them soon friend. My fathers name was Michael Dome by the way. well done best wishes. Pete.

Michael Dom
Date: 12/28/2013 7:32:00 AM

Hey Pete, thanks for swinging by lol.

Date: 12/18/2013 12:54:00 PM

- A very nice poem, Michael !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Dom
Date: 12/19/2013 2:41:00 AM

Hey Ann-Lise, thanks for your visit.