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Night Sky

cold vast darkness infinite void of loneliness scattered with glittering whispers of ancient heroes silently watching the silver moon drifts in frozen solitude

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/10/2013 8:57:00 PM
Adam, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/4/2013 4:45:00 PM
This is very nice Adam, I have a contest with 6 spots open. a very beautiful poem... Linda
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Date: 6/4/2013 4:45:00 PM
Adam. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda"
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Date: 6/3/2013 8:34:00 AM
This is a truly beautiful collection of words. I love the line 'scattered with glittering whispers' Well done. Welcome to P/Soup
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Date: 6/2/2013 1:51:00 PM
- Adam, a lovely small poem - Welcome to P-Soup! - Have fun with poetry! - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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