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Night Queen

Silence falls in noise movement slows down as creatures wait for her arrival the ones that follow her soft waves of glow like kisses that feather wet lips that still have not been quenched urging for an open mouth that would release a moist tongue Her breath showers like mist pleasantly eerie; a snake wrapping around your chest but calming you with his heartbeat conjoined to yours She does not speak, but her eyes glare; not wicked or demanding, but guiding and observing they speak for her: Praise me Love me Want me Need my smile upon your back upon this gloomy lair and let my skin glow around you within this night of dare let my thoughts become you and ease of things that scare for I am the sister of your mother, and I am here to care. She doesn't utter such words, but her rhythm is already known Her eyes stay watching as her past twinkles around her Her smile a memory stuck on her face For all she want is for him to join her again but those moments are so rare only when they dance to eclipse that their heart will not be teared she is the queen of this night sky kingdom and her worshipers have given her crown but she longs for her king, next to her empty throne...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/15/2010 9:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I can see why in this lovely poem of yours! I especially like the first and last lines of the poem... Love, Susan
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Date: 7/15/2010 9:36:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram’s contest., you are such a great talent. Please keep your poetry pen dancing to the drum beat of your passion.. Be great and enjoy the honor. Love, always, Adeleke
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Date: 7/14/2010 9:12:00 AM
Wow!!!!!!!!! what a bunch of beauty!!!!!!! Excellent job!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!!!!!
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Date: 7/13/2010 3:13:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, Jessica! And thnx for the comments on my "Deep In Her Bosom". Always appreciated. Am going ahead to post our collab. Love, JA
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Date: 7/13/2010 3:14:00 AM
Congratulations Jessica, on placing in the “Luna - the goddess of moon” contest with this very nice poem. Enjoy your glory! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 7/12/2010 4:39:00 PM
NIcely done. Great job at personification. LUv, and congratulations! andrea
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations Jessica on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Luna-the goddess of moon". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:59:00 AM
Jessica, congratulations on your poem's success in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:58:00 AM
One of my favorites for the competition, Jessica. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:51:00 AM
Congrats Jessica on your winning poem in the Luna contest with this awesome write on the theme.. enjoy your wonderful victory.. with luv..
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:33:00 AM
My congratulations, Jessica on your win with this personification. Great write! And thank you for your comment on "No Beer but Whisky". Beer is better than wine if one has stomach problems. And a whisky (a Scotch) at bedtime is just great!...Have a nice week...Gert!
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Date: 7/12/2010 7:58:00 AM
Congratulatons on your well deserved win with this great Personification, dear Jessica. Love, Lainie.
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Date: 7/12/2010 6:01:00 AM
congrats on your success in the contest. Well done. Bg
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Date: 7/12/2010 5:54:00 AM
Congrats on the 7th place win in my contest, Jessica
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Date: 7/11/2010 1:15:00 PM
wow!!! Jessica, enjoyed your poem.Very intriguing and brilliant,, a hint of sadness though,,still enjoyed. Have anice one,..p.d.
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:49:00 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest, Jessica
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Date: 7/10/2010 7:05:00 PM
Fascinating and intersting write. Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 7/10/2010 6:52:00 PM
Such a moving poem, Jessica. There is an empty throne next to me and I can relate to the longing you describe so well in this beautiful poem. And you can just imagine the way her eyes looked when she was begging for love. Awesome writing! Love, Carolyn
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