Night Maps

in daylight’s grace, a casteless sphere revolves poignant maps emerge at night the wealthy shine like stars kimo (10-7-6) syllables

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/14/2021 1:01:00 PM

Wanted to say congrats on this winning work. Yes, the poor have to work and there isn't any extra to go out at night and shine like stars with diamond glitter. Sara

Constance La France

Date: 9/8/2021 9:12:00 PM

David, congratulations on your win in my Kimo Contest with your wonderful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/7/2021 3:17:00 PM

Congratulations!

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/7/2021 4:37:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2021 8:12:00 AM

Absolutely gorgeous. One of my favorites on the winner list!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/5/2021 3:52:00 PM

Its great to be able to drop by again and say many congrats on your win David:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/3/2015 3:28:00 PM

I am sorry to be repetitive in my comment. Pretty well we are all saying the same thing David. Beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/3/2015 9:00:00 AM

wonderful imagery many congrats David:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/3/2015 8:49:00 AM

Congrats on your big win David,have a lovely Weekend...huggs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/2/2015 10:20:00 PM

David, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held last year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very odd contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "BLINDFOLDED" if you'd like or have the time. Always & Forever *LINDA*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2014 8:51:00 PM

GREAT imagery!!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/30/2014 7:43:00 PM

oh great job, I can see the world from a distance with your words. :)