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Such golden galaxies of heavens light Treasured footnotes kept unto my care Hope's silhouettes that shine each night But that by God's Grace did let us share We danced through each gilded beams caress Away to such distance we'd dare not guess Entwined in arms our hearts closely pressed From pleasured love that sought nothing less With each full moon's glow I'm carried back To one nights life lest be swept by time So sure this hearts echo will never lack No truer passion found from any rhyme Memories gathered from beams of light Shall prevail forever with loves sight 12/14/2016

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Robert Lindley

Date: 12/23/2016 11:00:00 AM

Truly a well crafted and classic sonnet, so beautifully rhymed and image filled my friend! Sure wish I had written this gem.. A fav....

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/23/2016 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Robert...

Francis J Grasso

Date: 12/21/2016 8:00:00 PM

Always a joy to view your work, Charlie. Just lovely! ...Fran

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/22/2016 1:54:00 PM

Thank you Fran...

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/22/2016 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Fran...

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/20/2016 1:31:00 PM

This is a gorgeous, warm and passionate filled sonnet, Charlie. It's beauty is depth that touches me as a woman and poet. I absolutely love this poem and I'm impressed ... CayCay

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/20/2016 4:05:00 PM

I am so grateful for your kindness CayCay, thank you...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/20/2016 1:43:00 AM

Amazing love captured in your beautiful sonnet, Charlie:) well done:)

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/20/2016 6:46:00 AM

Thank you Jo...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/19/2016 11:46:00 PM

YES< Charlie you have captured the essence of love!! Nostalgic wonder of a poem.

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/20/2016 6:45:00 AM

Thank you Andrea...

Paul Callus

Date: 12/16/2016 3:19:00 PM

Some memories, especially romantic ones, will never be lost in darkness, Charlie! A most delightful sonnet. ~ Regards // paul

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/19/2016 11:17:00 AM

Thank you Paul...

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/16/2016 9:18:00 AM

Beautiful flowers of emotion ... a joyous read ...

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/16/2016 12:05:00 PM

Thank you Probir...

Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/16/2016 6:01:00 AM

This is a gilded piece of art. Expresses such wonderful emotions. A 7

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/16/2016 12:04:00 PM

Thank you Afzal...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/15/2016 8:44:00 PM

A classic sonnet, so beautiful and well written!

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/15/2016 10:35:00 PM

I. Take great pride and pleasure whenever you read my work ARTHUR. I don' t think you'd waste the time on something lacking your attention. Thank you again...

Paloma P

Date: 12/15/2016 7:10:00 AM

Stunning reminisces Charlie, a wondrous sonnet.

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/15/2016 10:42:00 PM

I rather consider your work holding the more stunning mantle, Paloma, mine a bit more workman like. But from your sincerity I take great pride. . Thank you so much...

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/15/2016 10:29:00 PM

I rather consider your work holding the more stunning mantle, Paloma, mine a bit more workman like. But from your sincerity I take great pride. . Thank you so much...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2016 3:52:00 PM

Very nice, Charlie, you chose the picture I would choose if I were to do this contest. we are moon lover romantics

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/14/2016 4:12:00 PM

I don't believe I had a choice...That was the only one that spoke to me. Thanks Andrea.