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Night Falls

Red sunset dips night's curtain drapes the bay lovers embrace for Charles Henderson's haiku competition

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2011 12:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Deirdre in Charles's contest "Haiku Your Way". Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/6/2011 4:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/30/2011 12:56:00 PM

Hi Deirdre - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the haiku contest. Best wishes, KC

Charles Henderson

Date: 1/29/2011 8:44:00 PM

your quite welcome. Is a fine haiku. My new contest is up.

Kash Poet

Date: 1/29/2011 5:29:00 PM

This one is awesome! Congratulations Deirdre on your well deserved win .This Haiku should have been placed among the top three(my opinion)--kashinath

John Freeman

Date: 1/29/2011 4:56:00 PM

Congratulations Deirdre, on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2011 4:41:00 PM

This was one of my absolute favs. Did I fav it? If not, here goes!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2011 4:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/29/2011 12:01:00 PM

Congrats Deirdre on your winning poem in the Haiku your way contest with this brilliant write .. enjoy with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/29/2011 11:24:00 AM

Congrats Deirdre-- you sure painted a very romantic image here, love that first line :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/29/2011 8:22:00 AM

Lovely, .......just lovely....well done, Deirdre! Congratulations on your win!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2011 9:05:00 PM

wow, I really like this romantic one. A highest rating!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/27/2011 8:59:00 AM

Nice pen picture of the lovers sanctuary with lovely images, deirdre