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Night Appearing Slug

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Went out one day to take the cat some fresh food and there on the cat's plate was a slug..There was only one little spot of jelly left on the plate and the slug was eating it..I guess it had a sweet tooth..Sara

. night appearing slug slimey creature on cat's plate.. one drop jelly left

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Cheryle Sanders

Date: 1/13/2012 7:29:00 AM

beautiful imagery, a very cool haiku.

Kash Poet

Date: 1/10/2012 11:19:00 AM

Very nice haiku here Sara.Enjoyed the read.

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/10/2012 8:31:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, enjoyed much with jelly, my friend. bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/10/2012 6:08:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Sara. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your wonderful writing in this new year 2012. Love, Carol P.S. Yes I did fall the 28th of December.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/9/2012 10:12:00 PM

Dear, Sara,,, yikers... now that is the reason, i don't kiss my kitty no more...lol ~ Well whatever makes them happy... a slimmy slug yummy... thanks for the smile...p.d.

Tim B

Date: 1/9/2012 4:17:00 PM

I feel for the poor cat, nasty little creatures those slugs... just add a bit of salt to taste ;). Interesting visuals here Mrs. Sara, and great poetry.

Jack Horne

Date: 1/9/2012 2:35:00 PM

Eeew - I can so visualise this one! Love the descriptions

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/9/2012 2:07:00 PM

I do like cats - I am notso sure about slugs.You stuck to the 5 7 5 format - which is allto the good. Haiku is a great form. Thanks for your support. Peace &Love Matthew Anish

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/9/2012 12:02:00 PM

I just had to say...ewwwwwww!! They are so slimey !! Enjoyed !!