Night

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Although the night is no longer young Beauty decorates the evening sky Captured is my heart by stars far flung Deep upon a dark canvas they fly Enumerate each constellation Find all galaxies humming in space Generate a census destination His words spoken creates each trace Isn't the creation wonderful Just look around each day and night Keep those eyes wide open for the plentiful There could be one grand delight tonight Inspired by "Before the Night Grows Old" line in Mystic Rose's poem

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/25/2015 8:04:00 AM

There already is one grand delight today, Sara, and that is this lovely poem! WEll done! #7 // paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/24/2015 8:12:00 PM

G'day Sara... nicely written Sara and the topic fits in so well with the photo - thank you Sara - Lindsay

Tammy Reams

Date: 7/24/2015 3:06:00 PM

This is beautiful poem Sara with a lot of imagery! The picture was an extra bonus.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2015 2:59:00 PM

oh the imagery is so so vivid Sara - so glad Vienna inspired you! Hugs Jan xx 7

Lee Carter

Date: 7/24/2015 2:55:00 PM

Love this... Specialy "deep upon a dark canvas they fly" beautiful! ~Lee

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 7/24/2015 2:51:00 PM

Beautiful poem of night and light.