Night

Tortuous night over Sun comes up slowly - morning Mourning black loss

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/10/2011 6:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Liz. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/9/2011 10:02:00 AM

Congrats Liz on your haiku "Night" being featured. Vince

Liz Walsh
Date: 6/9/2011 10:22:00 AM

Thanks Vince - will have to get back to the writing. Liz

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/7/2011 8:51:00 AM

My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Liz

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/5/2011 5:50:00 PM

Congrats Liz on your featured poem this week on PS. a great piece to share with us all with luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/9/2010 2:04:00 PM

a verydeep image Liz, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

David Smalling

Date: 9/9/2010 9:39:00 AM

Yes, this is true picture of the art, a perfect haiku; congratulations