Night

N. NIGHT RaviNG Calm solace Sweet talks, soothing walks My soul yearns for that Gaze That tea in the Balcony Moon awaits the starry embrace! form: Clarity Pyramid. Symbolically & Metaphorically the speaker talks about a beloved, in whose calm, and wild company, the speaker finds peace. Speaker is yearning to have those moments and awaits the beloved's loving embrace. ~Paghunda Zahid (1-07-2022)

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Catherine J. Broussard

Date: 8/19/2022 11:26:00 AM

I feel your poem, thank you my friend!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/22/2022 5:53:00 AM

Is this true, if so I'm very happy for you sweet Paghunda. You haven't heard from me in a while, but don't ever please think that I could ever forget you - your charming nature, your poetic talent, your kind and gentle comments paint a holistic picture for me of a young friend I would love to meet. Great write, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/23/2022 11:18:00 AM

You are really sweet and kind Jennifer. Thank you. Stay blessed and happy

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/11/2022 9:09:00 AM

Oh this is so beautiful, Paghunda. I adore the opposition of solace and yearning - such a passion felt, such a passion ready for release. Exquisite, my friend, especially the last line! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/23/2022 11:16:00 AM

That's really sweet of you Susan

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/9/2022 7:27:00 AM

Hello Paghunda, I stopped bye to read this poem. I also find this poem romantic. Blessings my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/11/2022 11:58:00 PM

I understood this without the explanation Paghunda. This is romantic and beautiful. Congratulations on your win. Have a lovely Valentine’s Day. Blessings xxoo

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/23/2022 9:20:00 AM

Thanks a lot Connie

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 2/9/2022 1:40:00 AM

Paghunda, congratulations on your winning placement in this poetry contest, and thank you for your contribution of this poem. It is beautiful. I hope that you meet your true love soon, and may the merry stars shine on the balcony of your love when you find that precious forever darling of your heart!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/23/2022 11:15:00 AM

Thank you. Pleasure is all mine. Blessings

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/13/2022 4:59:00 AM

You set the scene for a romantic encounter with the girl of your dreams Tom

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/12/2022 10:00:00 AM

Different readers will interpret differently as they unwrap its mystery. It is the foremost joy of reading a poem. So, since you have already unraveled the poem's meaning, all i can say beautifully Written, which actually is, beautiful! Thanks - Marshall

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/23/2022 11:19:00 AM

Thank you Marshall

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/12/2022 9:58:00 AM

Dear Poet, I read the poem, and then, when I was about to comment, my feelings, i saw your explanation of the poem! why? I have to say, and say it with love, you have committed a sacrilege! The prime aesthetics of a poem is to keep it wrapped in mystery. And the prime rule of reading a poem is to feel it, without any regards to its actual meaning......

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/23/2022 11:21:00 AM

It's a bit disappointing. Some people fail to dig deep to find the meaning hidden beneath metaphors and other figurative devices. So that's why I had to explain it.

Valsa George

Date: 1/12/2022 8:27:00 AM

Paghunda, may you be granted with sweet talks, soothing walks and starry embrace.... ! Passionate longings so concisely and poetically expressed

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/11/2022 8:12:00 AM

- Paghunda, a lovely poem ... I enjoy reading :) - Best wishes for a happy new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/10/2022 10:39:00 AM

A beautiful verse, evocative of night's tranquility. Delightful reading, Paghunda!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/7/2022 3:35:00 AM

Lovely pyramid, Paghunda, succinct and sweet:)

Anil Deo

Date: 1/7/2022 12:06:00 AM

Congrats: this poem is on 100 newest poems LIST. And because you value "sweet talks, soothing walks" and for 2022, YOUR PURPOSE IN LIFE & WRITING soothes thy soul ( and of readers who dare).Salaam

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 1/7/2022 12:47:00 AM

Oh wow... Thank you. Posted it just last night... Awesome