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Nicholas

Your fingertips caress my lips And heavy breaths amuse my neck Our tongues dance wet and twisted My hair in your hands tense and tightfisted Your arms wrap around me and you pull me close Skin on skin we start to roast Now hot and sweaty you push me away My flesh is burning is all you can say We lay apart though not for long My hand finds yours where it belongs

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/28/2016 6:07:00 AM

Michelle,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@