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Nice Guys Finish Last

It's all brand new so it's time for fears, As long as you're with me you will see no tears, Forever and ever to have and to hold, Can't wait for the day to taste your heart of gold, With an open mind and caring heart, In hopes that we shall never part, To hold you close and nevel let go, For all my love to you I'll show, Bonded by words we both can say, Glad you could stay for more than a day, Because in a relationship I need some trust, Yet since I met you it seems impervious, No second thoughts about the way I feel, Always be around if you keep it real, The road is long as well as hard, If you want a real man let down your guard, I'll step right in with crazy force, Then I better let nature take it's course, Never will I hurt you or make you cry, Before that happens I'd rather die Being who I am is such a task, Nice guys always seem to finish last...

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Date: 5/22/2016 5:38:00 PM
Jamie, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*"
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Date: 8/12/2015 2:17:00 AM
Good one. Steady is seen as boring. I have heard so many complaints that all guys are the same yet the complainant keeps going for the bad boys or the flash. I like the way the last line almost turns the whole verse into a question. Regards, Ian
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Date: 8/12/2015 2:08:00 AM
Jamie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/12/2015 12:24:00 AM
jamie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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