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Niagara Falls

Inhaling the mist on Niagara's waters, we sail, Love and romance, in the mist's sweet tale. As couples, we mirror the falls' ebb and flow, Peaks of passion, in the mist's soft glow. Yet a lone soul, lost in the cascade's thrall, Streams of loneliness, down the falls do fall. In search of love, in the mist's swirling sea, Losing identity in the falls' mystery. Disembarking the boat, we bid adieu, Exhaling farewell, to a friend so true.

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Date: 1/27/2024 9:07:00 PM
A nice poem about love, and waterfalls. Great rhyming, Jay. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
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Date: 1/27/2024 3:36:00 PM
I loved the contrast between the first and second verses...one filled with romance and passion while the second is filled with heartache and pain--both occurring at Niagra Falls, a place symbolic of love and romance...well done, sir.
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Date: 1/27/2024 3:26:00 PM
Hello Jay , I have been to Niagara Falls in Canada several times. I have been on The lady of The Mist. On a hot humid day it is a good way to cool off. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 1/27/2024 12:31:00 PM
Well-penned poem, with great imagery, Jay.
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Date: 1/27/2024 11:33:00 AM
- Would like to see Niagara Falls once in my life ... preferably not alone and without fog ... feels loneliness in the last verse - Have a lovely weekend, Jay :) - hugs
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