Get Your Premium Membership

Next Time

no need 4 me to go to hell, already here, different levels tell, doing me time, a boring gripe, up or down, next earned, new life? in next time:) Don

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/6/2011 10:10:00 AM
Interesting approach to all the levels of Hell! Well I hope you aren't already there!! Thinking pleasant thoughts might help!! Incredible work!!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2011 5:21:00 AM
Next time let's be closer to each other. Tony
Login to Reply
Date: 11/5/2011 8:53:00 PM
Don,, strong words... now what intrigued this meaning... thank you for sharing... i myself think we are born into hell.... p.d.
Login to Reply
Johnson Avatar
Don Johnson
Date: 11/5/2011 9:03:00 PM
a response brought to mind by Linda Marie's "Realities"?....sometimes the mind gets a push, do we get words thrust upon us from the other side...

Book: Shattered Sighs