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Newborn Loggerhead

Tiny sea turtle; creeps its way across white beach sands to sea. Newly hatched reptile, learning to swim into his new life; he’s free. One day, he will grow into a very fine loggerhead.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/9/2014 7:22:00 PM

The verse made me smile babies of any age are so delightful in their innocence. Light & Love

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/10/2014 1:40:00 PM

Aren't they though? Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Debra Squyres

Date: 11/9/2014 12:42:00 PM

I've seen many PBS tv shows showing the life of the sea turtles. It's amazing to watch them crawl out of their sand covered nests and scramble slowly to the sea. Nature is amazing and these creatures are too... nicely written sijo !!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/10/2014 1:40:00 PM

Thanks you so much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2014 12:15:00 AM

I remember reading some story about these and how some people were trying to preserve them on a beach. such a wonderful part of nature, and a great theme for your sijo.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/10/2014 1:39:00 PM

Thanks, I've always loved turtles.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/29/2014 7:04:00 PM

The eggs get eaten by raccoons or other vermints I imagine. When the eggs hatch yeah. Are they than caught for food and shell and so on by fisherman? Excellent sijo. I need to find out what I can do to help.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/30/2014 2:03:00 AM

These numbers are quickly dwindling; I keep writing for better protection for these babies. Thanks for reading and leaving a commnet.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/29/2014 4:40:00 PM

Thank you Sandip; I hate the thought that these beautiful creatures may someday go extinct.

Sandip Goswami

Date: 10/29/2014 4:15:00 PM

Yes,you are absolutely right dear poet...Beautiful...It's the magic of super power...Best wishes to you and thank you very much...