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New World Order

Now sat among the debris of the day confused and helpless as a child at birth, his senses pounding hard within his frame - mixed messages of equilibrium. All frames of reference cast into a jar, commingle as a coalescent broth into a jumble of perceptiveness, now pushing to be free beyond his mind. At last the signal snakes down to his lips and snaps his jaw awake as breath is sought; feeds hungry lungs which roar within his chest and urge his flesh to swell against the press. New vistas draw a whisper from his throat a new word not yet spoken … Tsunami.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/14/2015 9:41:00 AM
GREAT SONNET My personal taste in sonnets is composed and presented as three four verse stanza's with a closing couplet. Somehow I find the overall theme easier to understand that way. This is a very good sonnet my friend. A7
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Date: 7/29/2015 6:23:00 AM
written as a Sonnet - my first
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