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New Style..Few Haikus About Feelings

My eternal soul sizzling out of Heaven wandering somewhere Blissful ignorance Fairy tale world plays onward Truth is forgotten Hidden behind books daydreaming these words come true Waiting for true love

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Ariabelle Sierra

Date: 8/22/2009 2:34:00 PM

thankyou. You have to excuse me im still new to this. To me it just seems like a haiku because of the form.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2009 7:34:00 AM

Good morning Ariabelle. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol

Ariabelle Sierra

Date: 8/16/2009 10:29:00 PM

thankyou guys for the comments.:)

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/16/2009 5:49:00 PM

Very dreamy write you did a great job! I like the feeling it imitates! Laura :)

James Knox

Date: 8/16/2009 3:48:00 PM

very well done :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/16/2009 3:08:00 PM

Interesting Thriple Haiku, Sara