New Shoes

Sharp hemp splinters Cement warms as it hardens Keep holding my breathe

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Dee Camp

Date: 4/18/2010 4:21:00 PM

I like this, puts my feet right in the shoes...ouch!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/18/2010 9:27:00 AM

I know what happened Robb... A poet named Cecilia Ramos won 12th place with A Star For Tony about her brother's death.. I just went to look for it and she deleted it after winning therefore u will now move into 12th place... hope this clears this issue up for u.. I don't know why she did that.. but its her option to remove it if she wants.. u originally came in 13th however due to this turn of events u will now be in 12th place and I will post it on my winners blog..thankxxx luv.. "Sweetheat"

Royal Trevino

Date: 4/18/2010 8:51:00 AM

good write... are you holding your breath because of the pain???... blisters await lol

Royal Trevino

Date: 4/18/2010 8:49:00 AM

good write... are you holding your breath because of the pain???... blisters await lol