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New Deal Black Tuesday October 1929 Vanishing wealth; stocks decline Great Dust Bowl Windstorms and drought, top soil gone Breadbasket empty; nature’s con FDR He’s the man, New Deal imposed Opportunities renewed; hopes rose New Deal Reigns Work offered by the CCC Saves the lost American dream Recession Echo The winter plunge 2009 Who will save our dreams this time? Reality Knocks Frustration with Congress, current events November elections a time to vent New Deal Needed Americans looking for leadership Power from sheep about to be stripped *For Constance, a Rambling Poet’s “Create your own form, maybe?” contest By Carolyn Devonshire I work frequently in this form that I choose to call “Headline Couplets.” It includes a headline followed by rhyming couplets that address the concept, person or event in the first line of three-line verses. Probably inspired by my years as a journalist.

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Date: 12/11/2010 3:33:00 PM
Hi Carolyn. You called this one alright. Thank God some of the power was stripped but not enough.Soup mail
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Date: 11/23/2010 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this fine contest..Sara
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Date: 11/15/2010 8:46:00 PM
Glad to see this make the top ten, Carolyn. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/15/2010 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Constance's contest "Create Your Own Form, Maybe?". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2010 11:56:00 PM
Carolyn ... Congrats on big win in the contest....Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/14/2010 9:12:00 PM
Your headline couplets were terrific. I love the form and flow. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 11/14/2010 1:29:00 PM
What a wonderful form. So apt and current. I was there through all of these changes. Congratulations, Carolyn. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:22:00 AM
congrats mother on your well deserved win. i love your poem and form, brilliantly beautiful. Doris Culverhouse did a poem for me, i was elated. this is the first contest i have ever joined since i started writing poems(excluding one in a million contest, because i entered wrongly) thank God i made it. Love, Lightening Ink.
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Date: 11/14/2010 7:12:00 AM
Applause for your well-deserved win, constance... and deepest thanks for citing mine in your contest.. much appreciated! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/14/2010 4:19:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Carolyn
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Date: 11/11/2010 9:54:00 AM
great styly. John H Loving III
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Date: 11/11/2010 9:53:00 AM
i remember FDR and John Baner is no FDR. john
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Date: 11/10/2010 11:15:00 AM
Carolyn, call it "tabloid" it brings the truth to into conversation using the couplets. I love it.
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Date: 11/10/2010 2:24:00 AM
yes cool form or format. Leadership is what is needed. Good leadership...and sheep that will stop acting like ostriches.Seems we are on a slippery slope without brakes. Great poem.
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Date: 11/7/2010 4:00:00 AM
Great form, Carolyn! And wise historical insights presented. Good luck in the contest. (Go see my new facebook photos...11/6/10 album = 102nd Birthday Celebration Love you. I hope all is going well. You remain in my prayers. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 11/6/2010 9:11:00 PM
excellent peace once again duncan
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Date: 11/6/2010 2:59:00 PM
Very interesting form to show us here, Carolyn. Hey, between FDR and today, lots of headlines missing. REmember how hard things got in the 80's too? So many ups and downs. And now everything is so interconnected, I greatly fear the crash coming next! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/5/2010 6:22:00 PM
Smile "Headline Couplets? Maybe!! Best of wishes. Quite a unique idea on Constance's part for a contest. Agape, MOses
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Date: 11/2/2010 7:24:00 AM
Hey I like the idea of "headline couplets." This is a cool, new form and you work well in it. Good luck in the contest. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 11/2/2010 2:01:00 AM
the form is excellent. why didn't you call it journalistic couplet form?
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Date: 11/1/2010 11:50:00 AM
Bravo Bravo ~~Magnificent~~ I see a headline saying WINNER here Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2010 3:18:00 PM
Great Idea Carolyn and so topical and well written. Perhaps you can help. I have written something that has 4 lines of prose followed by 4 lines of rhyming couplets. Am loathe to put it in for fear of being wrong, ( I'm new to this). Any Advice. Thanks, Eamon
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Date: 10/31/2010 12:34:00 PM
How creative and informative you are Carolyn. This new form could easily be adapted as a Souper addition to the Soup! How I remember my parents talking of FDR's New Deal....who would dream that in this day and age...we would be looking for another 'new deal' ?? Well done! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 10/31/2010 12:02:00 PM
Brilliant, Carolyn!! The development of this new form will be part of your legacy some day! This is going to my favs!!Great applause for you, dear. Just sent you SM..Much love to you. Always, Audrey
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Date: 10/31/2010 11:22:00 AM
Fun idea to do headlines, good luck on the contest, you have quite the history lesson here.
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