New Dawn

Love wasted on the years. Expecting the return without fear. To be abhorred was last seen. Taking flight of life's schemes. Igniting a fire that burns bones. Nobody knows. Going and staying no longer sees. Gilead is now on bended knee. Only mocked and scorned to be. The placement of deep agony and woe. Wanting what never was had. Wondering day to day the long weary road. A traveler, a stranger, a far away lad. Hoping peach and white. Please don't fear the dreadful night. A New dawn is there. By Christy Teas

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Bl Devnath

Date: 4/14/2016 8:05:00 AM

Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Christy Teas
Date: 4/14/2016 8:06:00 AM

Thank you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2016 9:41:00 PM

Christy Teas, Congratulations on your "Letting Go win." XOX ~LINDA~

Christy Teas
Date: 4/13/2016 10:00:00 PM

Thank you

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 4/13/2016 5:56:00 PM

I love this poem. Congrats on your win!

Christy Teas
Date: 4/13/2016 6:29:00 PM

Thank you

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/13/2016 3:54:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Christy :)

Christy Teas
Date: 4/13/2016 5:39:00 PM

Thank you..

Lu Loo

Date: 4/13/2016 1:37:00 PM

Christy, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo

Christy Teas
Date: 4/13/2016 5:03:00 PM

Umm....Thank you...I didn't know I won....how do I check...or know? Thank you...it's my privilege to write for you.

Anthony Mark

Date: 4/5/2016 4:35:00 AM

a lovely well executed write, the flowing imagery is complimented by the clever wording, well done

Christy Teas
Date: 4/5/2016 8:40:00 AM

Thank you....I wrote it in like 5 minutes...I read what was required then wrote it. I love words. The meanings origin that is. Thank you for The compliment.