'new Dawn'

sounds of ecstasy whilst wings flutter undisturbed a new dawn welcomed in nature’s distinctive way a thankful prayer uttered ©121220111945

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/11/2012 7:58:00 AM

I am stopping by to thank you for sharing your poetry with us Wilma. I would also like to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/14/2011 10:42:00 AM

Good morning Wilma, how are you? a very refreshing sound.. i like the fluttery sound... I'm glad to wake up every day... a prayer sounds nice,, enjoyed,..p.d.

Jack Horne

Date: 12/14/2011 9:26:00 AM

Beautiful piece, Wilma. Many congrats on your wins : ) lfde

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/14/2011 9:09:00 AM

Love this Wilma, congrats on your win. harry

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/14/2011 5:16:00 AM

congrats on your win in the contest with this tranquil depiction of dawn :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2011 7:12:00 PM

This is beautiful, and I see it won in some contest, though I do not which one. Congratulations!!

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/13/2011 6:07:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Wilma! Kim

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/13/2011 1:49:00 PM

Love those wings that greet the new day. Always something to look forward to. A sweet one Wilma!

Greg Stanley

Date: 12/13/2011 11:29:00 AM

Wilma, very nice poem with felling and emotion; a soft mood. Congratulations on your win

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/13/2011 8:49:00 AM

A nice with an optimistic note,Wilma.Congratulations on your win!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/13/2011 6:46:00 AM

I see from the comments that you have secured a win with this delightful poem, Wilma. Congratulations to you my friend. For lunch today miss Wilma, I recommend the delicious chicken salad sandwich with fresh tomato slices and lettuce laced lightly with ground pepper on freshly baked five grain bread . For your imbibing ploeasure you may choose from the assortments of liquid refresnments you have in the fully stocked shelves of your imaginatrion.. but please, use the champagne glass with which to consume whatever delightful drink you may choose. ... ME? I'm havin' a hot dog ..... :-D have a great day!

Don Johnson

Date: 12/13/2011 5:51:00 AM

beating of the wings, estatic things, dawn on the horizon... great poem here..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/13/2011 1:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your place x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2011 9:35:00 PM

This is really lovely, Wilma. WEll deserved win. congratulations, my friend.

David Williams

Date: 12/12/2011 2:54:00 PM

Wilma congrats on your win, sound words ..David

Kurt Kohls

Date: 12/12/2011 2:46:00 PM

congrats on your win wilma nice read... Kurt

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/12/2011 2:13:00 PM

This is lovely, Wilma. Thanks for taking time to read and comment on my poems. Your comments are appreciated. Kim

James Peranteau

Date: 12/12/2011 1:28:00 PM

I love the terse write dear poet ! And your title is an enhance of the write. Have a wonderful week Wilma ! Much love, james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/12/2011 12:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fours And Fives" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 12/12/2011 11:43:00 AM

* "AS I SLOWLY READ THIS MESMERIZING BEAUTIFUL VERSE A COUPLE OF TIMES THROUGH * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL WILMA * I FOUND SOOO MUCH JOYFUL BEAUTY * A NEW DAWN * AS DREAMS DANCE ON * I LUV YOUR BEAUTIFUL POETRY * YOU HAVE SUCH A GIFTED & PLEASING WAY WITH WORDS * HAPPY HOLIDAYS UNTO YOUR TREASURED BEAUTY * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH. *

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/12/2011 11:41:00 AM

....and the rocks will cry out too, Wilma! I love how creation worships Him even if we forget too,..... I read your senryus and there is definately a gift to writing in this form...what I thot was a great senryu for me pales in comparison to anything you have concocted. My husband and I in our jammies hop in the truck and go chasing these gorgeous dawns with our fancy cameras...coffee, cameras, and a gorgeous dawn like this one is a fantastic morning date!!! Luv, Gwendolen

Rick Parise

Date: 12/12/2011 10:47:00 AM

Beautiful!! great imagery and thought brought to light!!~Truly enjoyed~^God bless/^Rick