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Remove those chains, around my painful wrists. Remove these hurting hands, from my screaming throat. And stop your burning breath, from my hurting arms, my aching heart, my crying brain. Return to me the sight, speech, hearing, legs. Let me down from this prison, this fleeting life. Like smoke blowing in the wind, disappearing, gone. Words restored to script. words turned into rhyme. wheels instead of legs. Live like never thought could be. Seeing sun, hearing wind, feeling love, for more than just me, far more. *** July 8, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Date: 7/10/2017 10:50:00 PM
There will always be new beginnings, mate! A very emotive write, Duir!
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Darren White
Date: 7/10/2017 11:18:00 PM
Thanks Budgie my friend :)
Date: 7/10/2017 6:22:00 PM
Hello Darren. Can I join you in this new beginning. And yes, can I join Connie in saying you are a poet's poet. The power the expression the voice and tone the all of it is more than marvelous. Honestly. Well done entirely and completely. -- smile --
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Darren White
Date: 7/10/2017 11:18:00 PM
Oh thanks! I am honored by both your compliments Lisa :)
Date: 7/10/2017 4:13:00 AM
You are a poet's poet Darren, and that is the finest compliment I can give you! Love, Connie ; )
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Darren White
Date: 7/10/2017 4:16:00 AM
Thanks Connie, that's a great compliment!
Date: 7/9/2017 3:57:00 PM
You are the most positive person I know Darren and have and will continue to overcome many obstacles in your life:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 7/10/2017 1:22:00 AM
Thanks Jan, hugs :)
Date: 7/9/2017 9:16:00 AM
You make sad interesting!
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Darren White
Date: 7/9/2017 9:23:00 AM
Haha :) Well, everything is better than making people cry all the time (although I am good at that.......)
Date: 7/9/2017 7:35:00 AM
Wow, impressive and strong write Darren. I especially love your last line. ..Maria
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Darren White
Date: 7/9/2017 9:21:00 AM
Thanks my friend :)
Date: 7/9/2017 7:18:00 AM
Nice one Piroet. Hugs
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Darren White
Date: 7/9/2017 9:20:00 AM
Thanks ma mo Hugs
Date: 7/8/2017 5:23:00 PM
Strong write. Here's to new beginnings and "far more".
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Darren White
Date: 7/9/2017 1:41:00 AM
Here's to all that and more, Agnes!
Date: 7/8/2017 2:44:00 PM
Stay positive. There's always something to be thankful for. Lovely words.
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Darren White
Date: 7/9/2017 1:40:00 AM
I will, Elizabeth, promise :)
Date: 7/8/2017 11:46:00 AM
This one seems a little sad to me Darren. Keep your chin up. It gets better:)
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Darren White
Date: 7/9/2017 1:40:00 AM
I agree, it is one of my older poems, I can't write well at the moment, but I will be back!
Date: 7/8/2017 7:46:00 AM
Life is what we make it. Don't let the obstacles get in the way of happiness. Smile Saturday : ))
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Darren White
Date: 7/9/2017 1:39:00 AM
Happy weekend my friend!
Date: 7/8/2017 7:24:00 AM
Nice one Darren. I can understand this :)
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Darren White
Date: 7/9/2017 1:38:00 AM
Yeah, I thought you would :)
Date: 7/8/2017 1:28:00 AM
Very nice ink
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Darren White
Date: 7/9/2017 1:38:00 AM
Thank you :)

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