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Never Weary In Spirit

Love is young like a delicate rose- petal So easily flung, devoured by transient blooms Reckless the endings with salty lips of passion Only to find it is all about moonlit conquests. Love is a mirror of anger, perhaps a cry An obsession to hold when one feels alone; This clutch grasping unto shadowed vines of fear Possessing the other for ruthless exploitation. Frank H: Love Is by nette onclaud

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Faye Gibson

Date: 4/14/2014 10:57:00 PM

Beautiful poem. I have read several if your and you pack so much imagery and emotion into every line. I love poetry that sets my mind into motion..

Dan Kearley

Date: 11/30/2013 12:58:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments always. :o) Congratulations on your win! This truly is a beautiful write.. The true essence of what love is.

Donna Jones

Date: 11/30/2013 7:40:00 AM

Congratulations nette....loved every word!!!..accepting the other..now that's what its all really about....awesome

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 11/26/2013 1:40:00 AM

nette you have defined love excellently.I love the second para and the last two lines.It appeals more than other stuff.Great philosophy is the last two lines nette. love you. (: ) Jenish.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/24/2013 6:55:00 AM

"Love is Aurora bright, eternal in its light gleaming. Never weary, always unconditional through morn’s dew", beautifully said. Excellent poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Len Gasun

Date: 11/23/2013 3:47:00 AM

Hi my dear friend Nette! Hugs! Sorry for stopping by just now. So busy this wk . I came here the other day to release the result of my contest. So glad to read your poem about love. Excellent, so lovely & so inspiring! So love/like it! TYSM & Good Luck. I've mine but I dont know if its ok. Dec. is coming & here no Christmas so we only celeb @ schl. We've meeting yest. & the head informed us that we'll be given break Dec. 31-Jan2.-not enough for me to travel & go back home:((C u May.LovelotsLeo

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/22/2013 11:51:00 PM

This is such a beautiful and inspirational poem!!!

Ken Carroll

Date: 11/22/2013 4:17:00 PM

Hi Nette, Wonderful definition of love in this one.. Ken

Rhoma Em

Date: 11/22/2013 12:24:00 PM

Some of the aspectsof this thing called L is elusive for me but your stream of deep insights makes me ponder.A journey conveyed through enchanting verses never to be forgotten. " To see God’s face in a partner’s gentle eyes", top-rate weaver. Thank you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2013 12:16:00 PM

Great ideas about the topic reading like winning work to me..Thanks for stopping by "Swirling Fog"..It is finished now...Sara

Funom Makama

Date: 11/22/2013 11:59:00 AM

very interesting. I enjoyed it.

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/22/2013 11:36:00 AM

never weary of reading poetry like this nette, need i say more,, awesome and touching.

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/22/2013 11:36:00 AM

Wow, beautifully penned nette. What an awesome poem.

Poet Tacito

Date: 11/22/2013 8:31:00 AM

Spoken with a potent & deep heart full of intense clarity...and an appetite for potato chips. =) This was uuterly beautiful and I truly enjoyed its ending.

Daver Austin

Date: 11/22/2013 8:09:00 AM

I'm not too sure about love on the human plane of existence. I get more and more dubious as I grow older. Your final line is the solution of course, but so difficult in these times. Always great stuff, nette.. Love, daver

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/22/2013 7:26:00 AM

Wow, Nette, you have outdone yourself with this classically awesome write here! I truly enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this morning my friend! You have written an exceptional piece, one that I so very much love in itself! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/22/2013 7:21:00 AM

- A beautiful poem .... I love the line: "Breeding seeds of joy from evening to dawn" - Always remember this line ..... the world becomes beautiful.- Luck in contest ! - Have a enjoyable weekend my dear friend Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)