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Never Trust Strangers

She stammers, losing some words that her years cheat while her sunken eyes gleam, beads in velvet sheet. She stops gaping blankly as her brain tries journeying back, to pick out bits from the remnants of history, in flashback. Struggling against odds and evens she has sustained visibly made stranger in her own land, looted and drained. Strangers, she counts, came once to her doorstep when full of zeal she was to live life to her own step. They asked for her warmth and hospitality, playing cunningly, a ploy to abuse her generosity. A child of nature she grew among mountains; queen of its abundance and its cool fountains. For once she did not guess, those visitors from afar held intentions vile to leave on her land, a deep scar. Well fed and well entertained, they rose to conquer lives of the lush green which could stand no longer. Devoid of identity and glory, she danced to their tune; To save her own, from Queen, she became buffoon. Her people struggled but succumb to those strangers who knew nothing but the rule of traitors!

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Date: 1/24/2017 4:47:00 AM
Sunita, your poem celebrates the strength and will to abide. It could be describing so many places right now in the world. My thoughts run to Tibet and the sadness of what has become. I was very moved by your beautiful words which express joy then such sadness. This is excellent and very profound. Your first couplet blew me away! 7 ; )
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 1/25/2017 3:09:00 AM
Oh!....I'm simply overwhelmed by such an informative and an encouraging comment. This is so very kind of you. Thanks for reading and giving me your views. I agree with you...such sad things are happening in so many places. The abuse of power has no limit..my country's same, sadly.... Love Sunita :)

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