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Never Together

I've tried so hard, I've done my part, but you will never feel the same, all my hopes to be with you, gone down the drain, I love you, you see, but you don't love me, now my heart lies broken, so you can have it and i'll lie here, my empty chest torn open, I really do try, and just to clarify, you know how I feel, you won't love me back but instead you'd watch my heart crack, but oh no that's not what's truly happening, you see its not cracking, its absolutely shattering, I love you its true, and you know it too but you won't ever feel the same, its breaking my heart, your tearing me apart, your making me go truly insane.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/29/2014 5:54:00 PM
Hi Christina, I enjoy reading your material. Though it is sad it is also inspiring. You speak bravely from the heart. I think your best material is free and blank verse. You have natural meter built into your soul. Let your spirit run free. Keep up the great work. Take care. Earl
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Date: 2/9/2014 9:22:00 PM
Christina, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 1/28/2014 3:29:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Christina- I choose your first great written poem - hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/27/2014 4:37:00 PM
haha. I love it! well expressed, Christian, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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