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Never Say Never

Why I took him back.....after all that hurt Why i've had a change of heart Thou this one I wanted to dart I did not want history to steal this art So I opened the curtain and let the light in, which took more than a glance Then I proceeded to open the window to let the fresh air dance After opening the window, the birds and butterflies came in, couldn't miss a chance The scent of the fresh flowers breezed in without tense And there I sat smiling at the skies, pure with romance

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/17/2015 7:58:00 AM

I miss your visits Njeri.

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 12:48:00 PM

Hi Richard. I will come visit. am trying to reply to all my comments before I post any other poems or visit other peoples. I always feel terrible if I have poems that I haven't replied too. but I promise ill b visiting soon:-)

Ian Jones

Date: 7/30/2015 6:16:00 PM

I enjoyed this write and hope you don't mind me getting on my soap box again. If a relationship fails and breaks up there is a good reason and splitting up should only be done when every other attempt to rescue has failed, not in temper or on a whim. The problem is that if this is the case, what was wrong before remains wrong still so watch out. Kind regards, Ian

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 3:39:00 AM

I dont mind at all Ian. Thank you for your wise words

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/26/2015 4:10:00 AM

An excellence penned, I love your write. I also sat smiling as I'm reading your piece ........A.M.

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 3:38:00 AM

That's nice...thank you A.M

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 3:15:00 AM

enjoyed your write :) ~S.K.A.T.

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 3:37:00 AM

Thank you SKAT

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/25/2015 7:49:00 PM

G'day njeri... enjoyed the contrast of your two verses in this poem; the first with some regret, and the second with a glimmer of hope - thanks you njeri - Lindsay

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 3:36:00 AM

Thank you Lindsay for your sweet words

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/25/2015 7:14:00 PM

The good thing about the window, is that you have a way to escape if he turns out to be a jerk. Sorry I couldn't resist. You deserve a man who will treat you like a princess!

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 3:35:00 AM

I love that! Thank you Richard

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2015 4:24:00 PM

Love the title and the sentiment in the poem - when you let the light in you see a different perspective on life and it is time to forgive:-) hugs jan xx7

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 3:34:00 AM

Thank you Jan for your sweet words