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never never land

storm howls in nether regions licking the dust off the earth like powdered sugar shaking and rattling loose all that's not tightly bound driving and pounding it spanks smooth beaches wave after wave lashing and crashing into drenched shores tide swollen beyond its limits challenging places it's never been like the wind in every nook and cranny groaning tossing jostling exposing realeasing its pent up energy in raging blasts making you die so many little deaths then rocking you like a baby to sweet never never land  where you dance with enchanted flora and fana until sparrows crying and fresh morning shining awaken you lying in the strong tender arms of your gentle snoring monster

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Date: 3/16/2024 6:28:00 AM
Beautifully written, smooth flow.
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Date: 3/15/2024 12:50:00 PM
Hi Steven , great poem , really enjoyed it , very descriptive great imagery felt like I was actually there , excellent . Daniel
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Steven Young
Date: 3/23/2024 9:07:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel.
Date: 10/13/2023 1:59:00 PM
I loved the unwinding of the story within this poem, not expecting the ending--gently snoring monster. And you created some awesome images and sounds. Well done, Steven! enjoy your weekend, Sara
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Steven Young
Date: 10/17/2023 10:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sarah!

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