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Never Mind

and then there was nothing but emptiness and void not even a cliff to jump off no ocean to die in only the persistent feeling that sensory overload was not so bad all that was left was not to put her feelings into rational thought because she cherished the freedom of the moment 06th August 2021

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Date: 8/6/2021 2:58:00 PM
Profound Kai, you can certainly take the reader on a wild trip, this one is tantalising on embracing the event horizon of pointlessness, brilliant cheers David
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/8/2021 2:39:00 AM
Thanks David.
Date: 8/6/2021 11:50:00 AM
I wonder how many times in life one says, "never mind"?????? A creative write. Have a blessed day/weekend.......................
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/8/2021 2:38:00 AM
Thank you Paula. I appreciate that. Kind wishes, Kai

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