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white hair came with wrinkles leanness, paleness and a bend- time…. don't touch my mind. Honorable Mention in STRAND SELECT N,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 2/14/2020 9:15:00 PM
so sad when the mind is lost in aging...I have seen it... good write Jenish… Happy Valentine's Day to you :) hugs
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/15/2020 10:39:00 PM
Thank you Sandra for this wonderful message.. Sorry, I couldn't wish you on time... Have a great day..
Date: 2/13/2020 2:52:00 PM
That's the worst of all, when the mind deteriorates with time. May it never happen to you! :) Gershon
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/13/2020 10:38:00 PM
May it never happen to anybody.. Thank you for your support..
Date: 2/13/2020 6:44:00 AM
Superb, Jenish. Excellent write.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/13/2020 7:14:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for your kind comment..
Date: 2/13/2020 2:09:00 AM
It's part of the package of life...a hard one to take...prefer the white hair and wrinkles any day...to keep my mind this way...
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/13/2020 3:02:00 AM
Nowadays, white hair is a fashion and wrinkles will follow.. Mindless people always on top.. lol... Thank you for your wonderful comment..
Date: 2/13/2020 1:58:00 AM
Sad when time takes everything from you especially the mind. Tom. PS. Soup mail.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/13/2020 2:59:00 AM
Thank you Tom for your valuable support.. Have a great day..
Date: 2/12/2020 11:02:00 PM
don't touch my mind, reminded me of diminish and Alzheimer's , I saw a few waist away forgetting those around them and if they did remember just a faint smile a glimmer of hope. Jenish, a lot said in a few words
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/12/2020 11:26:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your experience.. Time is a partial player.. He always plays differently to different souls..Have a great day Eve...

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