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Never Me

it's always something, but never me i'm dying inside, but you can't see my heart is broken, but you don't feel feelings are shared, but is it real everyone's talking, but nothing is heard everyone's listening, but its only words so many promises, but never any action aiming to please, but never satisfaction living and breathing, but it's not life your friend, your lady, but never your wife trying and trying, but it's not fair you're there physically, but you're not there all out of words, but writing a letter letting it all out, but it doesn't get better trying to be strong, but there's nothing but tears seems like minutes, but its been years wishing i was dreaming, but its so real feelings of hurt, but all wounds heal its always something, but never me i'm dying inside, but you can't see.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/30/2008 9:04:00 PM
Leslie - beautiful Rhyme and Flow - If you take and break this poem into two line stanzas it would be an excellent Couplet - If you wish look at one of the couplet poems I have written - Blessings
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Date: 7/29/2008 8:56:00 PM
love it hurts deep when we lose the one we love, but still the tears do come. but the hurt goes away, and a new love comes into our life. this was a heart felt piece you wrote.
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